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Sunbeam

 

I woke this morning

Amidst a splattering of sun

Dust motes twinkling

Like stars on the run...

 

...From the brooding night sky

Of a day far too long

But the warming rays of light

Told me, that night had gone

 

So I showered in the sunbeams

Like a meerkat at dawn

Walked out into the morning air

Feeling like a man reborn

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◄ Your gracious hosts

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 27th Aug 2021 18:46

Wow, thank you, Jordyn for your wonderfully encouraging comment! ?
And to Keith & John for your continued support.
And, John, your absolutely right! Always a blessing when your penckers open in the morning!

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John Coopey

Fri 27th Aug 2021 12:49

Always a bonus when you wake in the morning, Stephen.

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Fri 27th Aug 2021 05:10

This is beautiful masterpiece ❤ Well done.

-J

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keith jeffries

Thu 26th Aug 2021 21:09

A fabulous descriptive piece of writing. The first stanza is such an alluring introduction.
Thanks

Keith

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