My First English Poem - The rite of passing away
THE RITE OF PASSING AWAY
The discalced priestess steps ahead, leans her feet on the waters of the sea
Feminine Christ she doesn't sink, under her, dozens of mortal remains
She stops, even time arrest its course towards the arcane future
Her cesium-colored vestment stops flutter
The sea has exhaled the last breath
The dance of passing away begins
May the sea keep their corpses, Eucharist for the sea beasts
May heaven be an harbor for their souls
In an instant it's the dusk, the sky is on fire
A colossal funeral pyre of celestial wood, the clouds smoke
The sea bleeds, the ritual is over
The moon takes the place of the listless sun
A noxious white light falls upon all creation
The woman wants to cry, but she holds back
Her tears will not adrift forever in the sea of sorrow
She runs towards the shore, she is drained. Warm tears caress her ivory face
In the sky, the arc of the moon is both a sickle and a smile
Under the diaphanous light the priestess is a statue, her hands closed in the softly sand
A scops owl in the distance welcomes the night
A thick mist rises from the sea, spirits glides over the waters
Everything vanishes, now the girl can rest
Under her ambrosial crown a pillow of fine sand, over her a blanket of gracious stars.
Stephen Gospage
Tue 21st Sep 2021 08:55
I can only echo these remarks. Welcome!