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Membrane

 

I love you. What else matters?

Is there any more to say?

Note that I say ‘love’ and not ‘loved’.

Our lives would be so different

If our paths had not crossed;

We have formed our current selves.

 

I carry you with me;

Yes, I cling to a memory,

Fading away, I’m sure,

Though not quite disappearing,

And so never in the past.

 

But there is more to it than that;

A part of you inhabits me,

And, through slow depreciation,

That which remains is in me still.

 

So even should we feel disgust

And try to clean and scrub and purge

That last surviving piece away,

Our efforts will all be in vain.

Only time, and its consequence,

Can close this otherwise eternal

Story, this membrane of our lives.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 15:47

Dear Keith

Thank you for fascinating comment. Yes, the idea of an "indelible impression" is at the heart of all this. Not just the memory of someone who was dear to you, but the something deeper, a kind of occupation.

And thanks to Nigel, Greg, Stephen A., Rudyard, Holden and Brenda for liking this poem.

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keith jeffries

Wed 17th Nov 2021 22:17

Stephen,
A work of art in the context of human relations. I was immediately drawn to the line "a part of you inhabits me". In fact that stanza stands out as the kernel of the poem. Often when a relationship is broken by death the grieving person often says that a great part of life has been taken away or I now feel only half the person I was before. Some relationships whether short lived or lasting for many years can leave that indelible impression on the soul.

Thank you for this
Keith

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