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Forget-me-not

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Endurance is a flower

A bulb in winter’s depth

A rare-repeated wonder:

A sin we must forget.

 

In this-world-of-my-creation

In this world-of-make-believe:

Cancer, the death of children,

Are falling autumn leaves.

 

I see a road before me,

A  road I walk in vain,

A road through Trawden, Lancashire

A road that has no name.

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All roads lead to heaven

And all roads lead to you

And all these roads are empty

Of eyes of deepest-blue.

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John Marks

Fri 19th Nov 2021 12:40

Thank you Keith. I am glad my meagre words stirred precious memories. The gifts of memory, nostalgia and sentiment are much under-rated by those who despise common humanity. ?

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keith jeffries

Fri 19th Nov 2021 00:12

John,
There can't be many on this site who have heard of Trawden but as I lived in Harle Syke I know Trawden Wood, the bus route through Brierfield, Nelson and Colne and further on toward Barnoldswick. As children we used to walk and picnic there. I still have family in Briercliffe not far from the Craven Heiffer pub. My parents are buried in St James' Church Graveyard in Briercliffe.

A poem drenched in nostalgia which I am able to share with you.
Thank you for this

Keith

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