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Raft of Wreaths

eternal Truth in turmoil 

  lies pristine as ivory sculptures

    lunarlight alone reflecting in the dim

       of a thousand sunrise curses

    

     faces maimed by trying like crunched leaves

        seeds unhatched as souls beneath

           the surface of the mind's maddening river death

                   the world its raft of wreaths

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kealan coady

Fri 4th Feb 2022 09:51

Thank you for you lovely comments they're much appreciated.

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Martin Elder

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 22:37

There is marvellous description here. Love it

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keith jeffries

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 19:58

Deep and ponderous, but it speaks above the stench of a wilderness of lies and victims.
Thanks for this
Keith

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