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THE RED LADY OF PAVILAND

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Lay me in this sacred cavern

By the softly surfing sea

Let that dank and distant whisper

Ease in me this fatal fire.

Tell the Beast I bear no malice

She and I are of one flesh

Mine to gorge the gulls and shore crabs

Hers to feed my bretheren.

Can you hear the Old Folk calling

From the shadows of the cave?

In the surf that swells the sea-shore?

In the crying of the terns?

Twinned forever prey and hunter;

I slew her as she slayed me;

Lay the Beastbones here beside me,

That our spirits may be one.

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John Coopey

Wed 9th Feb 2022 22:31

Thankyou, Stephen. Trochaic. And thanks for the Likes, Brenda and Stephen A.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 9th Feb 2022 21:17

A fascinating rhythm and metre, John. Very effective.

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