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The carriage in the forest

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After three days of arguing the armistice was signed

in the French general’s private train

at a siding in the forest of Compiegne.

The Kaiser left for exile in Holland.

The military, unwilling to admit defeat,

still surrendered guns and planes.

 

No one told the people how bad things were.

A German corporal, recovering

after being gassed the month before,

a misfit whose life only made sense

in the trenches, blamed surrender

on socialists and revolutionaries,

 

treacherous tricksters; Germany

hadn’t really lost at all.

Comrades had regarded him as weird,

sat in a corner of the mess on his own,

didn’t care about leave or women,

received no letters or parcels from home.

 

The railway carriage, displayed in Paris,

returned to the forest where it remained.

When world war resumed, with swagger

and swastikas the corporal received France’s

surrender among the trees, in the same

compartment; the misfit’s moment of revenge.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Feb 2022 10:27

I post this poem again today, as my immediate response to the invasion of Ukraine by Vladimir Putin. It's to show that there is always some essentially inadequate leader somewhere, smarting from a permanent sense of inferiority, bent on rewriting history, regaining lost lands. To think that when the Soviet Union collapsed and surrounding nations regained their independence, someone called Francis Fukuyama wrote a book titled The End of History. But history's wheel is always turning. Fascists are fascists. Back then it was Hitler. Today it is Putin. Another misfit's moment of revenge.

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