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Sacred Salmon

 

You must see this fish!

You must see this fish caught in a net

You must see this fish caught in a net
hoisted high out of the waves

You must see this fish caught in a net
hoisted high out of the waves
by men who care nothing for him

A  blazing vision of his beloved
occupies his mind, delighting in his beloved
he would not exchange places with anyone
enthralled this way by love
he is prince of his world
he must pity us all

Would not exchange places with anyone
enthralled this way by love
he is prince of his world
he must pity us all

Prince of his world
he must pity us all

Pity us all
 

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Easter 2022

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Comments

Jock Strapp Jr

Mon 18th Apr 2022 17:32

Grand poem Adam my boy!

Plenty o those not far from where I live!

Jock.

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kJ Walker

Mon 18th Apr 2022 09:00

Really clever, and worked well.
I'm not familiar with this structure of poetry (does it have a name)

I wondered what was happening in the middle, then realized as I read on.

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Sun 17th Apr 2022 14:49

oh this is just lovely Adam I can see that you are a real and so sentimental lover of our wild life a man most definitely after my own heart albeit a feminine one

gorgeous

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