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Solstice

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Sunshine concealed

Her darkness within

A summer so long

Whilst waiting for him

She bathes in his rays

His passion so hot

Today's just a burn

His tomorrow forgot

But she never moves on

Till still

Turns to stone

A cinder filled heart

On a solstice alone

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 7th Jul 2022 17:54

Thanks Nigel & Stephen for comments & all who liked

I like that 'flames of time' line Nigel☺

I always feel I sound more 'poetic' if I write something that sounds sad Stephen 😁 I need to do something about that, it's a creative conundrum- Is it possible to sound cheerful and poetic? Your answers on a postcard please!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 7th Jul 2022 17:15

A lovely, sad poem, Ruth.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 7th Jul 2022 01:30

Flames of time
blow themselves out
feelings ice up
heart so cold.


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