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6 and 9 August 1945

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An unholy roar began to build
That cherry blossom day,
With thunder in the air,
Then, that miraculous, quiet.

A low rumble, a terrible tremor,
A movement towards total devastation,
Of the air, on that day,
When the earth began to shake.

Uncontrollably.
All the skies scorched with fire
And the air exploded
Fusing flesh with flesh
Into a whiteness
From which the dark shadow of a child,
Emerged, alone, all alone.

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keith jeffries

Mon 1st Aug 2022 09:40

This poem speaks clearly of the consequences of what the world witnessed in the Japan of 1945. God forbid that we are in a similar scenario but I fear we are. In this poem you paint a scene of dread so well. When Putin walked so easily into the Crimea we should have stopped sleep walking and issued a clear ultimatum but we were too busy buying his gas and ended up appeasing him with useless sanctions. All dictators have common traits. The parallel between Hitler and Putin is so obvious. Remember the Sudeten land? Luhansk and Donetsk?
John thank you for this
Keith

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John Marks

Sun 31st Jul 2022 11:50

Yes Carol, me too, but the killing and suffering in Ukraine continues as NATO refuses to commit troops because of Russian nuclear blackmail. And we know what the appeasement of Nazi Germany lead to in the 1930s. We should have called Putin's bluff in February and so saved thousands of Ukrainian lives.

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Sun 31st Jul 2022 02:23

I sincerely hope the world never sees other days like this! Your poem expresses the terrible consequences of the nuclear bomb[s] where most people didn't have a chance. 😢

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