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new days seen

a husk, a shell that's fallen off

the back that bore it's long day

a struggle supreme to be released

redeemed from odious yesterdays




i gaze at this in stupefied wonder

and peer into the dusky swirls

of the distant pealing thunder

that offers a promise of new days

 

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rkay   galateus   crypticbard   arkayye   excalibard   arqios   kesner

β—„ Life’s a broadway musical

restlessness β–Ί

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 1st Aug 2022 13:11

Thanks Keith Jeffries, you are much appreciated.

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keith jeffries

Mon 1st Aug 2022 09:32

The dawn of realisation. This is a good poem
Thank you
Keith

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