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We've got Your Favourite for Tea

With all the knocks I’ve shouldered off

like they were butterflies, you’d think

that I was tough enough to keep dry eyes,

but when I see your bed not slept in -

three nights in a row, the rag doll

on your pillow waiting to be hugged,

the note on the dresser I’ve read and read

and still believe I’ve read it wrong --

how wrong you’d be to think I’m stone.  

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Dai Miles

Fri 11th Apr 2008 22:55

Hi, again, Clarissa! Sorry I spelled your name wrong first time. My keyboard is wonky.

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Dai Miles

Mon 7th Apr 2008 22:22

Hi, Claria. Thanks for commenting. It isn't, but it could be, and maybe should be; thanks for the idea!

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clarissa mckone

Sun 6th Apr 2008 04:54

HI Dai, This is an interesting little poem. Is it part of a larger story? Thanks

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