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Morning Dew

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The woody petrichor

tingles my nose

as she brings me coffee

under the dimming lights

of a pergola

The rain has calmed the air

And the dawn starts to crack the clouds

with shards of yawning sunlight

She smiles

Her eyes twinkle like morning dew

I watch her saunter away

 And take a hot, comforting sip

of coffee 

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 24th Aug 2022 22:36

Yes, great song, John. I always liked Nazareth's version of it 🤘

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John Coopey

Wed 24th Aug 2022 08:25

I thought your poem an altogether more optimistic take than the apocalyptic “Morning Dew” I was familiar with from my youth. (You may not be old enough to recall it).
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4ytpuIp3WnE

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 23rd Aug 2022 19:41

Me to, John 😆
Thanks for commenting
And for the likes! 🌈

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John Coopey

Mon 22nd Aug 2022 14:50

I had to look that one up, Stephen.

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