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Afternoon Stroll

We strolled down the streets of Kyiv

One balmy August afternoon,

Past burned-out skeletons of tanks,

Which might as well live on the moon.

 

We understand this rough display,

To boost a noble people’s mood,

But battles rage not far away,

Where wrecks like this are caked in blood.

 

Conflict is a harsh performance;

You enemy is marked as bad.

But truth, uncomfortable, still looms;

All war is desperate and sad.

 

We should feel pity for these tanks,

Ridiculous though that may seem.

Their universe is bolted on ;

Those trapped inside can only scream.

 

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 24th Aug 2022 07:08

Your kind remarks are much appreciated, Greg. There was something inspiring about this display of wrecked tanks, but also repulsive because of the horror that they represent.

And thanks to Frederick, Hugh, Stephen, Holden and John for reading and liking this poem.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 23rd Aug 2022 16:31

Another remarkable poem, of tolerance and empathy, Steve. Such simple words, and so effective. And a brutally brilliant last line.

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