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The biggest council estate in Europe

This were where I grewed up
in the 50s
when Manchester were a building site
slums and bomb sites
and jobs galore

mekin ends meet
me mam
frittered money away -
or so I heard me dad say
on cake and such like
extravagances

or so I gathered
listening t'rows
when I were lying in bed
awake at night

and when she left
fer a week
sick n tired of it all
us kids had mince n stewed pears
everybloodyday

but it were worth it
in th'end
'cos th'owl feller
got such a fright
worse even that what th'Japs
gived him in Burma
or so he said.

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John Marks

Thu 8th Sep 2022 00:04

Thank you Keith, John, Frederick and Flyntland. The Jesuits had it right: give me the boy upto 7 years of age and I'll give you the man.

James Joyce’s pithy summary of his central religious dilemma was telling a friend: “You allude to me as a Catholic. For the sake of precision and to get the correct contour on me, you ought to allude to me as a Jesuit.”

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keith jeffries

Wed 7th Sep 2022 10:23

Hello John,
We are of the same vintage and experience. This poem struck several chords. I was born in Birmingham in '48 amidst considerable bomb damage. My father returned from fighting the Japanese and together he and my mum rented a prefab just off the Coventry Road. It was grim but laid some important foundations in my personal life.
Your poem says much more than the words that are read.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Flyntland

Wed 7th Sep 2022 09:48

Thank you for this poem - I can relate in part to it, times were so hard and bleak then that unless your readers expierenced it - they can't understand it - and it should be recorded.
I live in the south but both parents came down from Bolton for work, they found it and the town was not dirty but they could not escape from poverty .

PS. a huge thank you for 'Dirty Old Town' what a treat.

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