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Harold Riley - Salford Alley Man & Pigeons

On this freezing December Thursday.
She sits silently hunched
Over her one-bar electric fire.
Dismal north Manchester light
Seeps through her tightly drawn curtains.
Her entire world was broken
When the burglar came
And will never be the same.
She sips her sweet tea shakily.

 

She gazes up at the mantllepiece
A young man's face
Looks out of the cracked glass
His face smiles at her
Across the years.
Tears come
Flooding her wrinkled cheek. 
I hold her hand in mine
Entwine her fingers.
No words can reassure her
Tho I talk of locks, alarms, visits.
But I can see she's back in 1945
When she was so glad to be alive
and kicking.

🌷(4)

◄ So heavenly

A late Easter ►

Comments

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 17th Dec 2022 19:58

A heartbreaking scene, one which is only too common:
the response to which is "we'll send someone round when we can spare the personnel".

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John Marks

Sat 17th Dec 2022 19:42

Yes, thank you Keith. The middle-class elderly have much influence upon the present Conservatives: thus we have pensions in the triple lock etc. However, millions of people, most of whom worked hard for this country for 50 years, the elderly poor, have no such influence on any political party. Indeed Labour politicians (eg Gordon Brown) just dismiss those 'living' on a state pension as bigoted fools. Such lack of respect for the people who willingly devoted their whole lives to this country makes me sick.

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keith jeffries

Sat 17th Dec 2022 09:34

John,
The photo really sets the scene for this poem as it takes me back in time to those post war years in a Lancashire Mill town. The poem creates a scene of intimacy and sadness. People who are violated in a world they no longer understand and cherish memories of another and better time. 1945 was a place in time when the violence ended in what had been a world at war only to be assaulted with an invasion in the present day. How many such people are a part of this passing generation? How sad to be in those twilight years and suffer the insufferable and in such depressing circumstances.
Thank you for this
Keith

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