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Trees in Winter

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In winter, trees undress slowly, discretely

Allowing their leaves, to subtly reveal new colour

Growing darker, shrivelling, shrinking

 

Until, when they can hold on no longer

They fall, carving a slow path through the air

Drifting, making patterns. Which joining,

become one design of early winter shades

Settling on the earth, a natural carpet

 

Branches are left stark, bare

A skeletal outline. Reaching up,

to grasp the sun by day; the moon by night

Drawing down magic, growing

 

Winter gives us trees of differing shapes

Some stand alone, others mark out a route

For travellers who walk the footpaths

 

Now lacking softening leaves

Bark and twigs, show matt, deeply textured

As the tree continues to give shelter,

from within

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Hélène

Sat 24th Dec 2022 16:52

Vivid language, love it!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Dec 2022 21:50

There's a great physicality to this, Brenda. I really enjoyed it.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 20th Dec 2022 09:25

Even after recent hard frost and snow, some trees near us continue to give shelter, holding on to their leaves.

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