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North country

 

Photo by Illiya Vjestica on Unsplash

The adders of the south are missing here,
but there’s venom a-plenty
the poison of coal, oil and unfettered toil.
This is the land of swarfega! 
The men mess with their cars after work, 
while there’s light; 
cars bought for a fiver a time, at the auction, 
done up, they was.
It’s ten years since the last 
of the prisoners of war came home.
 It is 1955 and Elvis is king: no swinging 60s,
no Haight Ashbury, no algorithm.
In the north country of stark
sheep-ridden smoke-stained villages
folk are in no hurry to meet
the future. 

 

 

 

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â—„ i.m. Pte Jack Prince (1896-1966)

RUINS OF NINEVEH â–º

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keith jeffries

Wed 1st Mar 2023 11:02

John,
as always you capture the mood and place. Could you please send me the T Shirt. I was there.
Thank you for this
Keith

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John Marks

Tue 28th Feb 2023 23:17

Thank you Stephen. Right back atcha as our American cousins say. Takes one to spot one, as we said as children.


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Stephen Gospage

Tue 28th Feb 2023 09:01

Always enjoy your poems, John. They capture something every time - a place, a person, an attitude. You are a true poet.

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