The Enemy of Love
These curtains don’t fit
Daybreak come too early
The drink’s still in my skin
and on that bed of marble white
I lost you from my life
The signals all conspired
the well of guilt refilled
Reality cracked wide open
spilt down the corridors of misadventure
I lost you to the dawn
Tangled in a sheet of white lies
the enemy of love
raises his black hood
smiling at the keenness of his blade
I lost you to that gleaming axe
In a fraction of a life
in those most painful hours
I came to see all that I would lack
and quite how lost I’d be
in the absence of your love…
[2023]
Tom
Wed 28th Jun 2023 13:39
Hi Clare, first of all, what a huge compliment! I can't possibly imagine how this could be a Top 3 poem, but I'll gladly take it. Thank you. I know what I had in mind when I wrote it but I tried to pull back and make it a bit more open to interpretation in the hope that the reader could bring something to it. Perhaps, for you, it worked?! 😃
Thank you also Stephen, really appreciate that.
Thanks also to Kevin, Michael and Leon for your likes and taking the time to stop and read.