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Trickle

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With every new obscenity,

We grope for the familiar

When we try to summarise death:

‘A trickle’, steady or constant,

Of civilian casualties.

Strange how we choose to illustrate

The rubbing out of human life.

Our terminology betrays

A culture ruled by quantities

And drip-drip measurements of loss,

Or, as likely, by the comfort,

Of images of gurgling streams,

Injected as a sedative

To deaden the pain. And the dead.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 8th Jul 2023 08:00

Indeed, Graham. I have heard the term ' a steady trickle of civilian casualties' quite a few times on news programmes. I suppose journalists have to say something, but it sounds rather callous, as you say.

Thanks for your comments and for liking this one, and thanks to John, Pete and Manish for their likes as well.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 7th Jul 2023 12:07

Someone’s trickle is another person’s waterfall! What a callous term to commemorate death.

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