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HAIKU FEELINGS

Things can be said or done in haste

This can result in our feelings being hurt

But our feelings can be hurt more, by our

own mistakes

 

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Rick Varden

Mon 25th Sep 2023 22:09

Ferris: Like all forms of poetry there is the ‘traditional’ format to follow, but no strict rules apply to any. The spirit of Haiku is kept in my work, in that it follows a theme of being a ‘proverb’ to get a point across.

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