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Until Tomorrow

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I tire from the hard days.
I am still in the moments in between.

I feel a sense of release when the wind blows.
It feels cold and soft as it touches my neck.
The sound of beautifully combined notes plays in my ears.
And I am able to feel the world I'm living in.

The day ends, and I put things away.
I wash some clothes,
I take a shower,
I prepare my things for the next day.
I lay down to sleep.

I wake up,
I go to work,
I go to school,
and I go home.
And it repeats.

If only I could repeat it
With you.

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◄ Everything Ends

A Young Heart ►

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Hélène

Thu 5th Oct 2023 04:18

A great read, I was drawn into your day...lovely details like the feel of the wind. And yes, as John highlighted, a poignant, unexpected ending.

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John Gilbert Ellis

Wed 4th Oct 2023 15:53

Love poems like this that can take you to the last line and change everything.

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