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If Only

If only we could get along

As neighbours, lovers and as friends;

To learn to sing each other’s songs,

And join hands as the world intends.

 

Some obstacle stands in the way

Of life in harmony and peace;

The children of all nations play,

But come adulthood this will cease.

 

For once toy guns and catapults

Are swapped for a more strong-armed state,

There seems to be but one result:

A chasm of mistrust and hate.

 

Concealed as pawns in this divide,

The people know deep down it’s wrong.

If only we could look inside,

If only we could get along.

🌷(9) 

Peace   love

â—„ Molten Man

Voice â–º

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 17th Oct 2023 17:24

Thanks for your lovely comment, Hélène. I shall try to keep writing from my heart.

And thanks for liking, Holden.

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Hélène

Tue 17th Oct 2023 11:56

"Naive" poems are like prayers, like songs from the depths of our ancient hearts. Keep on writing them Stephen! I love this poem!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 17th Oct 2023 09:17

My thanks to Frederick, Clare, Holden, Steve, K Lynn, Manish and John for liking this.

A no doubt naive but heartfelt poem.

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