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Wind, Lifting

When things are complex

(as many things are)

oh what a joy it is

to discover the simple!

Layers and layers,

like piled-up cloth 

on a market table,

we slowly lift each fabric

to see its weave--

tightly woven,

our emotions packed in hard,

loosely threaded,

we breathe to find relief.

Oh what a joy it is!

when the cloth,

freshly laundered

and hung to dry,

blows in the wind,

lifting and dancing

in quiet drifts--

the simple emerges,

and we see the gentle horizon,

once again.

🌷(6)

◄ Into the Holy

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 7th Nov 2023 14:28

Hélène, it's an absolute pleasure to read your poems. I liked the idea of a cloth hung to dry and it's dancing caused by the blows of wind.
Thank you.

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keith jeffries

Tue 7th Nov 2023 13:53

Soothing words which offer a different perspective on today's fraught world.
Thank you for this,
Keith

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Nov 2023 12:07

Thanks Hélène, your words are an oasis of serenity in a maelstom of horror.

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