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Our Time

This was our time:

A time of fat,

A time of plenty,

Of gluttony, sucked straight from the vat,

And pots of gold in packs of twenty.

A time of excess,

Of haunting, taunting, flaunting,

Of stretching the zeroes to impress;

A time of unrepentant, rabid lust,

A time of cities reduced to dust.

A time of the swine, the plundered mine,

Of hate and anger drunk on wine;

A time of noise, of lethal toys,

Of bovine, sweary, bloated boys.

A time of waste, abysmal taste;

A time of bogus sorrow,

A time of no tomorrow.

 

Now it is their time……

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 29th Dec 2023 09:21

My thanks to Keith, Graham and John for the comments. I tried to keep the pace up and to spread this as wide as I could without (as is sometimes the case) being completely sure where it was going. I think your comments have captured a lot of what is in there - a sort of philistine facade with nothing much underneath, which leaves a lot of problems for future generations to sort out.
Thanks for the Boris take-away, John, and for the festive references, Graham. Some of this stretches back to New Labour (e.g. Peter Mandelson's 'filthy rich' remark).

And thanks to Nigel, Hugh, Holden, Manish, Steve, Tim and Anonymous Poet for liking.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Dec 2023 08:58

It sits firmly in modern (post-Thatcher) times for me. “Bovine, sweary, bloated boys” - has there been a more succinct description of Boris Johnson?
A classic, Stephen.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 28th Dec 2023 08:16

This works on so many levels Stephen
At times I was drifting down the Pagan route, then brought sharply back to 2023. Some cleverly disguised festive references too.
Very well balanced work. Bravo!

G

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keith jeffries

Wed 27th Dec 2023 20:26

A poem wwhich races to its conclusion but well written with much to think about.
Thank yu for this,
Keith

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