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The Prefab Garden at St Paul's

We said goodbye to my sister yesterday, a teacher for 34 years at St Paul's C of E Primary School in Manchester. She was a brilliant actor as well as being a great teacher, bringing every story to life. Her classroom, outside the main Victorian school building was simply known as "The Prefab". She also loved her garden and Spring was her favourite time of year. Writing this poem has helped bring some joy amongst the tears. The last two lines are taken from Mike Garry's wonderful poem "Signify" - please watch him perform this online if you haven't already. 

https://godisamanc.wordpress.com/2014/11/21/signify-a-poem-for-miss-mccoombe-my-old-primary-school-teacher/

 

 

Wet coats hung on little hooks, 

Alongside Ladybird reading books

Mrs Bottomley’s booming voice

The Assembly bell, let all rejoice

Because we’re safe and warm within these walls

And the sun shines and its light falls

On naughty Jason’s messed up hair

Who scampered behind the church, a dare,

Because the sun never, ever reaches there

But in the prefab it’s always morning, always Spring

With luminous daffodils, offering

A secret garden to every wandering mind

No child is ever left behind

For here is where the dreams are spun

With wisdom, smiles, laughter, fun

As Mrs Stephens waves her wand

And lifts us to a place beyond

Sodium lights on sodden streets

And sagging clouds and the thrumming beat

Of rain on rain on reflected glass

Where grey, reflected people pass

I held her hand; we closed our eyes

And imagined worlds beyond the sky.

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R A Porter

Thu 18th Jan 2024 13:04

Thank you Tom!

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Tom

Wed 17th Jan 2024 17:21

This is beautiful. 👍 and evoked some memories of my own.

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R A Porter

Mon 15th Jan 2024 16:15

Thanks Uilleam, for me it was Mrs Vere (in year 3 at Junior School) reading the Alan Garner books, especially the Weirdstone of Brisingamen - we lived not far from Alderley Edge & the idea of a parallel world of wizards, ageless warriors etc was very exciting & brought vividly to life as we listened. You never forget your teachers!

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 15th Jan 2024 13:29

Thanks RA.
What a gift to be able to teach in such a way as to be fondly remembered.
I still remember our teacher Mr. Daly who used to read to us Black Beauty towards the end of each day's class...I always looked forward to it!

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R A Porter

Sun 14th Jan 2024 15:06

Thank you Stephen, Carole’s was indeed an “admirable life”, filled with love and laughter - her son is a playwright & two of her young granddaughters are already very good poets, the best possible legacy for a teacher and storyteller,

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 14th Jan 2024 08:24

Thank you for sharing this, RA. A fitting memorial to an admirable life.

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