Visiting
for my grandfather
When I first came on a visit
to your lime-washed house
– a clean-kneed child from town –
your two great fists
impressed me, for they
were ponderous chunks
of granite, notched
carelessly for fingers
and which, at your own willed
creation, you had torn
from the heart of the land.
Yes, I knew then how
you had risen and, separate,
had kept on walking.
I was almost frightened
to be your friend, but still
am running so breathlessly
beside you, as you stride
onwards, the castle of yourself,
across rough fields
of thistle and clover.
And the dog is running
before us and laughter
creates a flawless sky.
Stephen Atkinson
Sun 4th Feb 2024 15:55
laughter
creates a flawless sky.
A great final line for a great poem. 🌈