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ARTHUR AP UTHER (THE WINTER KING)

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(A re-post of some years ago to co-incide with the screening of The Winter King on TV.  The narrative in the poem is closer to Bernard Cornwell's novel than to the TV version.)

 

As Briton fights Briton the Saxon awaits

And readies himself at Lloegyr’s gates,

Gorfyddyd of Powys consults with the Fates,

Siluria’s Gundleus too.

Outnumbered we hurried round hill and through dale

And came to this place where we’d die called Lugg Vale;

Our certainty spread like a plague that we’d fail

As fear and despondency grew.

 

We prayed to the Old Gods of Ankou and Bel

Some spat and touched iron, ill-luck to dispel;

The Christians prayed for deliverance from Hell;

Their priests rode behind in a waggon.

We all felt our battle-plan ill-thought and flawed

We mustered but 500 spearmen and sword

And none knew self-doubt that was wracking our Lord,

Arthur, ap Uther Pendragon.

 

Dumnonia’s poets would later describe

How Gorfyddyd payed to the Saxons a bribe,

And centuries later Mallory ascribed

To Arthur as Champion of Right;

 But we who would live through the slaughter that day

And saw the cruel fury with which he would slay,

Could never take oath on our weapons and say

Lord Arthur – A Chivalrous Knight.

 

But victory won and Gorfyddyd slain

And Gundleus given to Nimue again

Who peeled off his skin and, to cries of his pain,

Danced and gave thanks to the Fates.

While  Arthur ap Uther, no longer Wild Beast,

Outwardly smiled at the victory feast

But inwardly planned for the foe to the East,

The Saxon at Lloegyr’s gates.

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John Coopey

Sun 4th Feb 2024 22:19

Thankyou, Stephen and Kevin. If you’ve watched the series Kevin, this might be something of a spoiler in that this battle at Lugg Vale happens in the book but after the series ends. I may well do this on Thursday.
And thanks for the Likes, Stephen A, Holden and Paige.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Feb 2024 21:40

Really well written and rhymed, John. It flows and flows.

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kJ Walker

Sun 4th Feb 2024 19:44

Fantastic John.
If this is a re-post I don't remember it from first time round.
I copped out on the winter king and watched the series rather than reading the book.
One for Thursday perhaps?

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John Coopey

Sun 4th Feb 2024 10:42

Thanks Greg. There are too many references in this to explain them all. Cornwell's novel would do that better. But "Lloegyr" is worth elaboration. It literally means "Lost Lands" - what the British called the land in the east of England taken by the Saxons. When Wales play England at the Millennium Stadium you'll see the scoreboard read "Cymru 33 Lloegyr 0".

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Greg Freeman

Sun 4th Feb 2024 08:52

Enjoyed this, JC. I remember your history and battle poems from days gone by.

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