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Unlucky Street

Phone shop
Vape shop 
Chicken shop
Bookies

It used to be so sweet
Now it’s Unlucky Street

High crime
Traffic fine
Sex attacks
And decline

Phone shop
Vape shop 
Chicken shop
Bookies

It used to be so sweet
Now it’s Unlucky Street

Fly tipped
Dog shit
County lines
Conflict

High crime
Traffic fine
Sex attacks
And decline

Phone shop
Vape shop 
Chicken shop
Bookies

It used to be so sweet
Now it’s Unlucky Street

Front garden sofas
Poverty sarcomas
Everyone you know does
A shrug of the shoulders

At fly tipped
Dog shit
County lines
Conflict

High crime
Traffic fine
Sex attacks
And decline

Phone shop
Vape shop 
Chicken shop
Bookies

It used to be so sweet
Now it’s Unlucky Street

Tags in the litter
A mattress in the river
Stand and deliver
Throw up a pigeon’s dinner

On front garden sofas
Poverty sarcomas
Everyone you know does
A shrug of the shoulders

At fly tipped
Dog shit
County lines
Conflict

High crime
Traffic fine
Sex attacks
And decline

Phone shop
Vape shop 
Chicken shop
Bookies

It used to be so sweet
Now it’s Unlucky Street

Robbery’s a failure
Antisocial behaviour
Jesus Christ our saviour
Do us all a favour

Tags in the litter
A mattress in the river
Stand and deliver
Throw up a pigeon’s dinner

On front garden sofas
Poverty sarcomas
Everyone you know does
A shrug of the shoulders

At fly tipped
Dog shit
County lines
Conflict

High crime
Traffic fine
Sex attacks
And decline

Phone shop
Vape shop 
Chicken shop
Bookies

It used to be so sweet
Now it’s Unlucky Street


 

 

 

 

 


 

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<Deleted User> (35860)

Wed 24th Apr 2024 22:58

Somehow, I get the feeling that I wouldn't like to live there 😆

👍 stuff

Bethany

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Steve White

Mon 12th Feb 2024 05:55

Thanks John!

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John Coopey

Sun 11th Feb 2024 22:03

Top stuff, Steve. I enjoyed the poem but the song is brilliant, especially with that raggy accompaniment. Cracking use of repetition.

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Steve White

Sun 11th Feb 2024 18:52

Thanks Stephen!

I did end up setting it to music and the rest of the band quite like it, so we might work on a proper arrangement at some point.

My take is here, if anyone's interested: https://youtu.be/ol4jJ0mvBVM

And the video that I watched that inspired it is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q1s5g5Ew5Cw

And yes, you're right, the lack of investment, lack of care, the normalisation of decline; sometimes you have to step back to see it.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 11th Feb 2024 15:43

Terrific, Steve. An anthem of decline that no one seems to care about.

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