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rain on lawn - Brothers of Charity England

It was an ordinary, wet north Manchester night
of solid rain, unremittingly wet and cold.
when, suddenly, all the rivers, in all the world, stopped flowing
and all the summer colours leached away and never returned
and the wind it got so cold and stings like hell
and then the sky descends into the air
....and you’re not there.

The blackness is deep, deep and remains everywhere
and still today it is every….fucking….where.
then the doctor
tells us, as if  incidentally,
there is no function, he is dead.

I carry him into the mortuary,
past the lucky family,
with their sick, alive child
who look worriedly at us
as if they feared the contagion of death,
which they do.

I feel like shouting
it aint infectious you fuckers
and anyway what’s your fucking
God gonna do about it
?’
Except fucking cause it. 

 

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keith jeffries

Fri 16th Feb 2024 13:06

John,
a powerful poem indeed and one which I assume has arisen out of the world of today in all its calamity. Has God caused it? The final stanza shouts aloud this question. There are many answers to this dilema. Why does God cause or allow such misery? Galatians 5 says something about the freedom given to us and how we should use it. We cannot be without guilt for what we do with the freedom given. We can abuse it or use it to the good. The subject of a profound theological debate. Another mystery for which we search for answers.
An excellent and passionate poem.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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