Distance over time
I cannot taste the salty air
too far am I
since last was there
Though in its waning withered way
my heart leaps up
as if to say
No age endured no distance gone
shall come between
where I belong
https://wolfgarwords.com/2024/03/14/distance-over-time/
David RL Moore
Fri 15th Mar 2024 08:20
Thank you Stephen,
In terms of many ideas and their conveyance I have long said words are the enemy. Kick the door in say your piece and get out.
As you will no doubt have seen I don't subscribe to that tactic exclusively.
I see too many examples of great ideas spoilt by too many words. We just rearrange them to say mostly what has been said before.
I have been guilty, but do try on occasion to use restraint.
Thanks again,
David