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Early Walk

 

In the twilight of the waking day

the early bird unplugs the worm,

and I along my well-trod way

observe its hapless tangled squirm.

 

Eager beaks pluck spring fresh reds

as blossoms blush unperturbed,

while those still slumbered in their beds

seek in dreams what they once learned

 

as children with their minds alight

each early wonder newly seen,

would wish away the endless night

to once again be where they'd been

 

I mourn the worm and praise the wing

I breathe the air that holds the day,

these early hours make old men sing

as if again a child at play.

 

https://wolfgarwords.com/2024/03/25/early-walk/

 

 

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Auracle

Wed 27th Mar 2024 09:54

Yeah sure David. Onward and upward from now on. Glad we could type it out like this.

Write Out Loud is a good place

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David RL Moore

Tue 26th Mar 2024 07:44

Thank you for the influx of flowers to those who sent them.

Thank you Auracle, I appreciate your compliment although I feel very far from magnificent. Thanks for viewing the video, I believe the video clips enhance the story behind the writing (on occasion) it's a useful tool to iron out elements which may seem ambiguous and to sometimes lighten the mood.

Regarding miscommunications, there is no need for apology I believe we expressed ourselves clearly at the time and its onward and upward from here.

What I would say is I don't dispatch reciprocal likes without genuine like, I'm sure you feel likewise..I hope so.

David

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Auracle

Mon 25th Mar 2024 20:08

You're magnificent!

And thanks for the nice little videoclip on your website.

I'm sorry for our miscommunications. My sincere apologies.

Let's get along better from now on 😃

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David RL Moore

Mon 25th Mar 2024 15:04

Thanks John, and to those who sent flowers..

Possibly prevented some also, who knows...it is what it is and other meaningless shrugs of shoulders..

Cheers

David

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John Coopey

Mon 25th Mar 2024 11:17

Indeed, David. If only we knew then what we know now we could have done some damage.

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