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The Postman

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Warm, cold, rainy or breezy,

There’s never a day he’s off-duty,

A little bit old, very much lively,

He manages to drop-by daily.

 

Gentle knocks and letter-box taps

On houses that look all the same.

His vast mind is his only map,

He knows us all by our names.

 

Around here for about fifty years,

He senses what’s in the letter;

Blitheness, gladness, fear or tears,

Or something to make feel better.

 

He smiles when my letter’s cheery,

And withers when I’m doleful,

The day I feel happy and sunny

Is the day he feels gaiety and soulful.

 

When the day calls for the night,

He is reminded of incompletions

Brooding under darkness’s sight,

Waiting to reach the destination.

 

Reading them brings on a smiley,

Reminding of warmth and intimacy

And of the depths of being empty;

Of failing to uncover the intricacy.

 

In the drawer, beneath his pillow,

And in the unposted-box are a few;

Still very fresh and having the glow,

Still appearing young and twenty-two.

 

He has had his days of love,

Of something promising and pure,

The absence of which has been rough,

Leaving tad glumness to endure.

 

He lives a lot during the night;

Memories a dozen, dreams a few,

He is our morning ray of sunlight,

He was once a receiver, and a lover too.

 

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 27th Mar 2024 13:12

Graham, I don't think you'll never know how much this means to me - "you are getting better," I feel like I've been wanting to hear to these lines from you from a long time. Thank you indeed, your advice to me, for my betterment, has helped me a lot.
Cheers!😊

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 27th Mar 2024 09:37

A very expansive description of a very important person. With the demise of milkmen here in the UK, the postman is one of the last pair of 'eyes' that patrol our streets every day. They notice things!

Brilliant work Manish! Gosh you are getting better and better!

G

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 27th Mar 2024 09:32

Thank you Tim and Bethany for your generous comments, it means a lot to me.😊
Bethany, I wish I was, haha! I do occasionally produce colour art, maybe I'll try bringing it up here sometime. Thanks again.😌

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Tim Higbee

Tue 26th Mar 2024 15:49

I never thought of the postman or woman in that way before. Very thought provoking. Splendid work Manish.

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Tue 26th Mar 2024 13:27

This poem Manish, is as beautiful as the artwork ( are you the artist? ) Thank you,


Beth

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