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Sonnet 1 - Chorlton Water Park

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Face down in the water, she was found, unknown,

a mystery shrouded in the middle of Chorlton's grace,

No name breathed out, no story to call her own,

her life lost in a fleeting, haunted trace,

Lime-green top, drifting in endless sleep,

jeans covered in watery hue lay tragically still,

A tragic tale over the banks, sorrows deep

her mystery longers, pushing against our will.

Detectives approach the press in tears,

their words carried out in a broken sound,

begging the public to come forward and flow,

so her identity will hopefully be found,

standing unified, their voices resound

urging all to help her identity to be found.

 

 

 

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First up for#NaPoWriMo (National Writing Poetry Month) from myself features the first in a series of Sonnets, the first today is a news story that I became aware of the other day and has haunted me since as I know it really well around there.

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Source - https://www.manchestereveningnews.co.uk/news/greater-manchester-news/police-release-crucial-details-photos-28875998?

 

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Tim Higbee

Tue 2nd Apr 2024 20:48

A tragic but familiar story. Your words convey the lonely sorrow of an unknown person who cannot share her unfortunate end.
It evokes strong feelings of sadness while expressing the best in humanity who wish to do right for her.
Thank you.

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