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There's Still a Tomorrow

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The sky was painted dark grey,

And it began to slightly drizzle,

I wanted to quickly walk away,

But I was caught in the middle.

 

Besides the empty sidewalk,

Along the snaking rainwater,

A letter that wanted to talk,

Swam away like it didn’t matter.

 

Drained before I could reach,

I stood there in sheer denial,

“Come back,” I beseeched,

But it had reached its burial.

 

Am I going to hear back

From the sender ever again?

Or am I waiting by the track

Where the arrival is uncertain?

 

Perhaps it was my doing,

Or maybe it had to happen,

Maybe it was too exacerbating

For my fragile heart to handle.

 

I’m going to stop; stall here,

To just be completely sure.

I wouldn’t want to waste a tear

Of not having a full closure.

 

If it’s meant to be conveyed,

It will successfully find a way,

And if its eternally delayed,

It was never meant to stay.

 

What did the day provide?

What did I possibly borrow?

I am still imperturbably alive,

And there’s still a tomorrow.

 

🌷(8)

◄ January

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Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 4th Apr 2024 09:11

Thank you Landi Cruz, Auracle and David for your generous comments and inputs, they're very much appreciated!
I hadn't planned on writing this, it just came out in a flow and I'm glad that it did. Thank you all for taking the time to read my poem, it means a lot to me.😊

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David RL Moore

Thu 4th Apr 2024 07:42

Hello Manish,

Written with authenticity I would imagine.

Although we move on from moments such as you've described we carry them with us like photographs. Taking them out to look at them is an act of almost self harm, bitter sweet remembrance.

David.

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Auracle

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 20:34

same here.

and all the tomorrows will be somehow

- just keep swimming, swimming, swimming - Finding Dory'

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Landi Cruz

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 18:40

A moment full of possibilities--at once ordinary and ecstatic, impossible to bear )

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 15:39

Thanks for the read and comment, penguin. I intentionally keep some flaws with rhyming, I like it that way. Also lets me know how attentive is the reader.

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Ray Miller

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 15:10

Enjoyed the read, especially the off-rhymes. But handle/happen isn't even close. Maybe occur/bear?

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