Casanova
Who knew you were a veteran
when I was still navigating in this labyrinth
I was just a neophyte
who tried to ignore our every fight
We tried to piece the jigsaw of love together,
But I’m insecure and you’re immature
Should’ve put a full stop before things became egregious
And now the route turns devious,
It leaves me so lugubrious.
It was so fatuous
that I was so infatuated;
that I fell so deeply into it
it was all so innocent
Dating boy with complicated exes
How could I be so reckless?
You said you loved me with effulgent smiles
that made my heart run a thousand miles
You promised me the earth, the stars, the moon
And I trusted you because I was a lovesick loon
Wearing your sweater all of a flutter
Eavesdropping gossips all of a doodah
How much I wished today was April Fool
so that I could dispel this fatal wound
I was a pawn in your bet
since the first day we met
I mean darling what the heck?
I know you play hockey
But I never knew you were that cocky
Guess I should’ve taken a hint in your name
Hugo with a huge ego and no shame
Were you thinking about that brunette
When you gave me that nonchalant peck?
What a bewitching fiend
with looks shown in magazine
with charm that made me drain this poisoned chalice
and stuck to this haunting palace.
Ray Miller
Wed 17th Apr 2024 09:20
I enjoyed the poem, though it seems to be trying too hard with a few of the rhymes. Can someone be a veteran and immature? I gave it a little thought and, yes, I think so.