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Seasons of Life

I can feel my light

fading softly,

the brightness of youth

dims to the gentle glow

of old age.

Is life measured in years

or is it better to count the expansion of the heart?

Oh, how the heart rides the waves of love!

Turmoil gives way to peace,

doubt blossoms into faith.

Aging rises slowly,

inevitably,

while youth walks away 

at a fast pace.

The old ones smile,

knowing,

life is like a feather

on an open hand,

ever the more precious

as the wind carries it away.

🌷(9)

◄ Joyful Faith

Shimmering Light ►

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 24th Apr 2024 11:19

Life truly does seem to speed up as one ages Helene,
As I age I seek contentment. A friend and I started our own religion (current membership 2) named the Pago-Buddhists.
Getting old is okay! if you don't try too hard.
A lovely piece by the way rightly attracting attention!

G

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Tom Doolan

Wed 24th Apr 2024 09:40

A beautiful emotive and poignant piece. Made me reflect in my Autumn years. 👍

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 24th Apr 2024 08:48

I can't praise this too highly, Hélène. A beautiful, poignant poem.

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Evan Tyler

Wed 24th Apr 2024 02:53

This is fantastic! I really enjoyed this, so much! Made me tear up a bit.

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