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Still Life with Massacre

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It’s clever how they’ve set this up:

A bowl of fruit,

A jar,

A china dog,

An iron bar (an iron bar?)

 

Behind – some crumpled remains,

The stench of rotting heaps

Of defenceless women and men.

Still, no one can see or smell this,

So that’s all right then.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 25th Apr 2024 17:15

Thank you Graham and Stephen. The idea for this came to me during a surrealist art exhibition, when it struck me that you could put a still life arrangement into almost any situation, horrific or otherwise, and still call it a still life. The iron bar (twice) adds a bit of menace, I suppose.

That's the best I can do. I often find it difficult to explain the content of my poems!

And thanks to Aisha, Holden, Nigel, Tom, Evan, K Lynn, Steve, Hélène, Manish, Bethany for the likes.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 25th Apr 2024 00:17

Brilliantly effective 👏

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 24th Apr 2024 21:37

What a duopoly! The inanimate objects thrust into a nightmare scenario. What were you thinking here Stephen? Brutal but effective!

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