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The indefinite sentence

 

I cannot wrench another word

from the mansions of my skull,

Within a room so cranium white

I close my eyes to welcome dull.

 

As the fish against a hook

that twists and turns its own gut free,

we'll rip the pages from a book

so others truth we cannot see.

 

We spin and we avert our eyes,

at bitterness of being wrong

promoting our own freeing lies

we seal the cage where we belong.

 

My fingers grip and claw the bars,

my jailor wears a mask of me

he brings me oils to soothe my scars

that I might heal and be the key

 

to turn the lock that lets in light

that doesn't blind or darken thought,

but gives to all enlightened sight

so rarely found, infrequent sought.

 

◄ A Disinheritance

Gun in the fridge ►

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David RL Moore

Wed 1st May 2024 07:35

Thanks for all the recent likes on this.

David

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David RL Moore

Tue 30th Apr 2024 08:29

Many thanks for the comments and likes.

I'd held on to this for a while wondering if it would appeal to anyone.

I'm pleased I put it up now.

David.

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prakhar dhama

Mon 29th Apr 2024 19:37

This is one of the best poems i have read. That 4th stanza, just amazed me.
Thank you.

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Landi Cruz

Mon 29th Apr 2024 18:13

It's a fantastic composition, David.

So many lines strike a personal chord that I'm left wondering how to address them within myself, nevermind how I can ably approach them in a public forum.

Maybe the key is in the process and not the result )

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 29th Apr 2024 08:30

A rich and powerful poem, David. Thank you.

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