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AN BALLA BÁN

Some days no one comes.

I meditate like an old sage,

glad for the conversation of wind, 

the Willow’s back scratch and

the moss boot cuffs. 

 

The days when they came,

I remember a summer coat, 

celebrated in snowcem white,

concrete tall and plastered plumb. 

 

Those were the days when

young boys leaned, fingers clung, 

with boots dug in well worn ledges.

Daredevils tightroped in wobbled joy, 

and trapezed from a sturdy Oak.

 

When old men sidled to intimate huddles 

on Fair days, with concertinaed sheep on hemp. 

When young lover’s lust, dared

by shifting their hearts nearer the edge. 

 

Between days I tick like a clock in an empty room.

I flail like a sail inhaling the breeze.

I peel varicose paint from sun dried cracks,

damp beneath, like liver spots, betraying my age.

 

 

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*AN BALLA BÁN - Irish for The White Wall

 

Mask Poem

◄ AUTUMN

BROKEN SLEEP ►

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Ciaran Cunningham

Wed 29th May 2024 08:55

@bethanysallis @grahamsherwood @davidrlmoore @rosegcasserley - thank you all for the very kind comments. This was written as a mask poem, from the perspective of a white wall I climbed most days as a young boy. In the original I had an extra verse but sometimes less is more. 😉
Means a lot that you like it.

Rose Casserley

Wed 29th May 2024 07:54

Unbelievably stunning CPC!




Rose 💋

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David RL Moore

Tue 28th May 2024 21:16

Poetry.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 28th May 2024 18:51

This is indeed a very accomplished piece Ciaran, we’re lucky to have you. I was going to pick out some favourite words but it would be futile there’s too many.

G

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Bethany Sallis

Tue 28th May 2024 17:09

Ciaran, I could read this beautiful poem, over and over again and enjoy it each time, as if it was the first time.

Boy! Do you know your stuff and I'm very glad, that you do.

Thank you very much.

Bethany

P.S. What does the title mean?

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