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In the Still of Night  

 

The footfalls of silence echo softly in my ear

Like the reflection of slippers dancing in a mirror.

In the solitude of my mind the quiet echoes amplify

So loud it begins to resemble nature’s thunderous cry.

Mind shadows are awakened and rush out to play

But if I try to join them, they scurry quickly away.

My heart cries out to them, there is no need for fright

As I whisper softly "For lonely is the still of night."

A lifetime of seconds has gone slowly ticking by

Yet eternity yields nothing but a gentle sigh.

Physically bound to my chair by this mental plight

Reality has vanished and is nowhere in sight

I am held captive by the entity that we call silence

Who tortures my thoughts while daring my defiance

My heart hammers out a warning, a threat of power

But these thoughts won't retreat, they scarcely cower.

Confused and chaotic images are colliding in my head

Their weight becomes a burden, heavier than lead.

My mind starts to panic and struggle against the pain

Reality seeps in like water softening the bonds that restrain

Silence doomed decides to flee leaving behind a ruined scheme

Battlefields are littered with crippled thoughts and a soiled dream

The raging battle of silence has past, the muted foe has fled

I shall hastily depart myself into the safe haven of my bed.

Descending into depths of slumber where silence has no might

I whisper softly as I tumble down, “For lonely is the still of night.”

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◄ Wisdom’s Age

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 12:42

Agree with Manish, I definitely resonated with: "My heart hammers out a warning, a threat of power
But these thoughts won't retreat, they scarcely cower.
Confused and chaotic images are colliding in my head
Their weight becomes a burden, heavier than lead."




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Tim Higbee

Tue 25th Jun 2024 14:42

Thank you to those who liked this poem it means a lot.
To Manish and Martin, thank you for your comments, they are so greatly appreciated.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 24th Jun 2024 14:15

Loved the title, so poetic in itself. Every line is richly written, some of which I could resonate with. Especially, "Mind shadows are awakened and rush out to play
But if I try to join them, they scurry quickly away."
Another gem to your growing collection, Tim.

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Martin Elder

Mon 24th Jun 2024 10:28

There are some great lines here Tim. I particularly like the line

'Like the reflection of slippers dancing in a mirror.'

love it

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