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She's Fallen Off My Planet

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I was doing okay in my little world 
The flag of love was flying unfurled
But you ain't returning my calls
Girl you got me climbing the walls 
I don't think I can stand it for long
How come everything has gone wrong

She's fallen off my planet 
She's lost in outer space
While my world keeps on spinning 
As tears stream down my face 
She's fallen off my planet 
But I still have desire
Although my heart is breaking 
It's burning like a fire 

She's on her way to Venus 
But she still has Mars in her eyes
Mercury is rising in her heart
Saturn is burning and keeping us apart 
Jupiter is blurring the horizon
As Pluto punches holes in the stars

She's fallen off my planet 
She's lost in outer space
While my world keeps on spinning 
As tears stream down my face 
She's fallen off my planet 
But I still have desire
Although my heart is breaking 
It's burning like a fire

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◄ Miss You Everyday

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Tom Doolan

Fri 28th Jun 2024 19:23

Thanks for likes - Aisha, Leon & Holden. 👍

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Tom Doolan

Thu 27th Jun 2024 19:56

Thank you Stephen & Hélène for your positive feedback and comments. Much appreciated. 😊

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Hélène

Thu 27th Jun 2024 12:22

Well done, Tom!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 27th Jun 2024 11:23

I like the way this works as pure verse and song lyrics, Tom. Not easy. In your audio you shift seamlessly between the two. Good blues theme, whichever way you look at it.

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