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Lovers

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We are the lovers
of this kaleidoscope
this ride we’re on
As we twist, we write
of the myriad colours
the fireworks dazzling our eyes
of tears, tantrums, seering sunsets
the veins in leaves
the storms between people
beautiful and terrifying
all at once

We are the lovers
of words on lips
their taste on tongues
and turns of phrase, delicious
The flick of nib on paper
the trail of ink that follows
or a cursor birthing characters
Our thoughts collect as puddles
until they river and rhyme
We lament the train of time
as it whistles down the line

We are the lovers
Singing colours, painting feelings
or lost in quiet reveries
Chasing expression
and the peace of mind that comes
a certain satisfaction, the release
of spitting it out, of laying it down
Mental gymnastics
at the linguistic bench press
you’ve got to exercise that muscle
work it daily

We are the lovers
of language and experience
Sometimes, it’s a struggle
sometimes, it comes easily
We huddle together
at the edge of the world
and let the beauty spill…

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Tom

Tue 23rd Jul 2024 09:12

Thanks Enidgo, really pleased you enjoyed the flow... it rivers but it does not rhyme, this time. 😃

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Endigo Michaels

Mon 22nd Jul 2024 16:13

"Our thoughts collect as puddles
until they river and rhyme"

Beautiful! This piece reads and flows so well!

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Tom

Mon 22nd Jul 2024 15:12

Thanks so much Andy, Stephen and Messages for the comments.

And yes, Stephen, opening the laptop and working your thesaurus definitely counts as exercise I say!

Thanks also Hugh, Aisha, Stephen, et al for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 18th Jul 2024 17:20

A real treat of a poem, Tom. I have never thought of my laptop as a 'linguistic bench press', but why not?
Incredibly perceptive and fun to read.

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R A Porter

Thu 18th Jul 2024 10:12

Marvellous - you’ve nailed it Tom!! One to read, relish and read again. Lots of layers of love in there…

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Tom

Thu 18th Jul 2024 09:26

Thank you Graham, Hélène and Kim! Really glad you enjoyed and Kim, high praise indeed. Very encouraging.

Thanks also to Tom, Jordyn, Holden, K. Lynn and Tim for the likes and for stopping by to read this one.

Very much written with Write Out Loud writers in mind...

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kimberly

Tue 16th Jul 2024 16:03

This is a fantastic poem! Every line. This may be my new favorite.

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Hélène

Mon 15th Jul 2024 14:14

A stellar poem, Tom. Captures the wild, wonderful experience of writing in lovely imagery and word choice. Wow!

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 15th Jul 2024 13:37

I really like this piece Tom

'We are the lovers of words on lips their taste on tongues
Our thoughts collect as puddles until they river and rhyme'



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