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Orphaned.

An orphaned wisdom,

reared by the eras

but abandoned to dust, 

trailing its melancholy 

of understanding, counterpoint 

to the sleights of hand, 

and, if witnessed, glistening

like an act of christening,

in a decipherable tongue...

◄ Phantom.

Wrestling... ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Wed 14th Aug 2024 18:34

Thank you so much, Tim, I'm honoured and encouraged by your lovely comment; it genuinely means a lot! 😊

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Tim Higbee

Wed 14th Aug 2024 14:45

I find your work interesting Holden. To me, your pieces seem to have been written eons ago by some sage. They have this depth that feels like you are imparting some hidden knowledge that has escaped mere observation.
Thank you.

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 13th Aug 2024 11:50

Thank you so much, Graham, for your very kind comment, I truly appreciate it! 😊

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 13th Aug 2024 09:06

I enjoyed this piece Holden, its brevity with so much content, the last three lines very clever.
Thank you also for being so supportive of my poetry, I’m very thankful. G

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