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The Hanging Tree

 

I lay beneath the hanging tree

Where thoughts of who I used to be

Like salty tears, dripped from me

Falling 

            to 

                mediocrity 

And everything that I could be

And everything I thought I'd see

Lays waste beneath the canopy

Of that ancient, screaming  hanging tree

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 17th Sep 2024 22:29

Thank you, Tim. Glad you liked it!
And for the 🌷Tom, Stephen, Manish, Adam, Holden & Cryptid 🌷

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Tim Higbee

Tue 17th Sep 2024 12:42

A powerful poem, Stephen
I like the structure of your wording as well.

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