Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Can’t Get Close

Dancing, prancing across the floor

I lap it up and want some more

The tempo increases as does the heat

We glide around gyrating to its beat

 

The music, famous in the sixties

Excites us, drives us, now it’s the remixes

I’m thinking why I like you the most

But somehow I just can’t get close

 

We talk, I listen, you seem mysterious

Either that or your cautious, more serious

It’s almost as if there’s an outer shell

That’s fragile, tender, vulnerable as well

 

Why is it I feel that I can’t get close?

I can’t assume you even like me I suppose?

My problem is I over think

pushing myself unnecessarily over the brink

of self destruction at times

Causing me to write these rhymes

 

But no matter how hard I try

It’s like you draw me close

Just to look into my eyes

Then just as quickly push me away

And I live to fight another day

 

You smile and I sense some affection

But your situation perhaps drags you

in a different direction, so then you’re

unable to let anyone in,

to a place where only you have been

 

I think it’s best for me to give up

Let it all go and take a second look

I don’t want to be sad and feel morose

It’s just no use, I can’t get close
From '100 More Reasons for Rhyme' by Rick Varden

🌷(7)

◄ A Means To An End

Fanny Arlington ►

Comments

Profile image

Rick Varden

Sun 22nd Sep 2024 11:13

Thank you all for such kind comments😃

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 22nd Sep 2024 10:01

"My problem is I over think"
That's probably me Rick.

Hannah

Sat 21st Sep 2024 22:57

this is so well written!I love the style of poem and the words you used to describe your feelings.

Profile image

Arrianna

Sat 21st Sep 2024 14:41

Great poem! I definitely can resonate with this.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message