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Renew

The trees begin to wilt and fade;

Another year is on the fall.

Though autumn can defy the odds,

The winter’s cold is bound to call.

 

The daytime’s relegated role

Is limited to minor parts;

Discarded leaves drift down to earth

In patterns of the purest arts.

 

In nights replete with cloudless chill,

We shiver at the crisp-cut moon;

The powdered snow beneath our feet

Is poured from nature’s fertile spoon.

 

Though icy spells at turn of year

Are unavoidable and true,

The brief suspension of life’s churn

Will soon give way to spring’s renew.

Seasonsnature

◄ God

Loser ►

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 18th Oct 2024 10:03

Thank you for your kind comments, Graham, Tim, Tom and Manish. I thought I would try something a bit more lyrical this time.
And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 16th Oct 2024 15:06

I loved this one, Stephen G. Beautifully done!

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Tom Doolan

Wed 16th Oct 2024 13:56

Nice work Stephen 👍

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Tim Higbee

Wed 16th Oct 2024 12:35

Like the season itself there is a beauty and easy flow about the piece that carries the reader along with it.
Beautiful!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 16th Oct 2024 11:00

Love it Stephen. Being an autumnal baby I particularly relish the current colour changes. Even the gradual decay of everything seems to be done gently.

'poured from nature's fertile spoon' are some of those words you wish you'd written yourself!.

I always look forward to your poetry. Well done sir!

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