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The Poppy and The Cross

With fewer his majesties
There’d be fewer dead
Yet he leads the remembrance
The old soldier said
The symbols that you see
Are there to show you who’s the boss
They know that you’ll comply
With the poppy and the cross

The poppy and the cross
King and country and the rest
It’s amazing what you’ll suffer
To be told that you’re the best
His Majesty don’t care
For your sorrow and your loss
So long as you’ll die for
The poppy and the cross

That fella with the wreath, he said
Signs the papers off
To manufacture weapons
For the poppy and the cross
To ship them overseas
For genocide in foreign lands
His jacket wears a poppy
But bloody are his hands

Bloody are his hands
King and country and the rest
It’s amazing what you’ll suffer
To be told that you’re the best
His Majesty don’t care
For your sorrow and your loss
So long as you’ll die for
The poppy and the cross

He holds a shepherd’s crook
And he wears a bishop’s hat
The old soldier said to me
What do you make of that
Here to give the slaughter
Some of his pious gloss
Here to lead the prayers
For the poppy and the cross

The poppy and the cross
God and country and the rest
It’s amazing what you’ll suffer
To be told that you’re the best
His Majesty don’t care
For your sorrow and your loss
So long as you’ll die for
The poppy and the cross

Don’t confuse sacrifice
With being sacrificed
The old soldier spoke
Of the wicked loss of life
King and country, God and crown
Will never count the cost
It’s you and I that die
For the poppy and the cross

The poppy and the cross
King and country and the rest
It’s amazing what you’ll suffer
To be told that you’re the best
His Majesty don’t care
For your sorrow and your loss
So long as you’ll die for
The poppy and the cross

◄ Good King Amesbury

Comments

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Steve White

Wed 13th Nov 2024 15:28

Thanks Martin, Stephen and John.

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John Coopey

Wed 13th Nov 2024 08:06

Marvellous poem, Steve. One of the best I’ve ever read on here. But it begs the question “Would the world have been a better place if Edward VIII with his Nazi sympathies had been on the throne and Chamberlain Prime Minister And War with Germany avoided?”. So should we have just sent Hitler a stern “memo”? As Stephen says, “thought provoking” indeed.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 12th Nov 2024 22:28

I echo Graham's sentiments, but a fantastic thought-provoking poem it is. 👏

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Martin Peacock

Tue 12th Nov 2024 19:40

Excellent. Well structured, and the repetition really drives the pathos home.

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Steve White

Tue 12th Nov 2024 18:22

Thanks Greg!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 12th Nov 2024 14:50

Beautifully crafted poem, Steve, in the voice of a first world war veteran, it seems to me. I can imagine Sassoon applauding.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 12th Nov 2024 11:36

Down with virtue-signalling, that's what I say! 😡

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Reggie's Ghost

Mon 11th Nov 2024 18:18

Yes Graham, as valid as Steve's poem is it is not for today IMHO.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 11th Nov 2024 12:52

As Stephen has noted a very well written piece. However my thoughts lie only with those that served and fell who gave us the liberty to criticize and comment as we all do! Let’s remember that.

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Steve White

Mon 11th Nov 2024 11:11

Cheers Uilleam! The old lie, indeed.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 11th Nov 2024 10:20

100% spot on Steve.
Many of the UK's so-called "Great" and so-called "Good" are currently cheerleaders for genocide. I'll have no more part in allowing myself to be gaslit by such hypocrisy.

To quote Wilfred Owen:

“My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.”

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Steve White

Mon 11th Nov 2024 09:55

Thanks Stephen! Watching the service from the Cenotaph on a TV in a Wetherspoons (long story) definitely gave me food for thought.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Nov 2024 09:35

First of all, Steve, this is superby written and rhymed. Care has clearly gone into it. And it tells a deep, inconvenient, truth and just shows what impact a good poem can have: it's ordinary folk who pay the price for war, not the dignitaries who lead the ceremonies.
But you have said that far better than I can.

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