Oates; Antarctic Terra Nova expedition team member 1910-1912
That morning
you had decided Captain
not to be any kind of
a burden to the others anymore
your sacrificial story tells
of your walk towards death
and how your heroically disappearing figure
had probably been swallowed up in seconds
whited out by the howling raging blizzard
doubtlessly you wouldn't have lived long enough
to have known
but it is likely that
inspirationally boosted by your gallant decision
who can say other
than they your very brave colleagues
how much more acceptable and fitting
it would have been for them
to have passed away in a sleep of patriotic pride
despite being deprived of victory
TOM MERTON
Wed 13th Nov 2024 10:14
I have just added an additional line at the end that helps to round the poem off a little better. Thanks very much Red