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Oates; Antarctic Terra Nova expedition team member 1910-1912

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That morning

you had decided Captain

not to be any kind of

a burden to the others anymore

 

your sacrificial story tells

of your walk towards death

and how your heroically disappearing figure

had probably been swallowed up in seconds

whited out by the howling raging blizzard

 

doubtlessly you wouldn't have lived long enough

to have known

but it is likely that

inspirationally boosted by your gallant decision

who can say other

than they your very brave colleagues

how much more acceptable and fitting 

it would have been for them

to have passed away in a sleep of patriotic pride

despite being deprived of victory

 

  

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Comments

TOM MERTON

Wed 13th Nov 2024 10:14

I have just added an additional line at the end that helps to round the poem off a little better. Thanks very much Red

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