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On the Buses

on the bus I watch their faces

and wait for them to read line five

it’s the one that’s guaranteed to

draw a reaction of some sort,

a furrowed brow, a double squint

puffed cheeks, a silent expletive

or a look of surprise, then

surreptitiously they might look

around to see if anyone else

is also reading it, it’s the last line

that is the real killer, it leaves

them hanging lank, like washing,

did she or didn’t she? and what

became of the letter?

I only wish I knew!

© Graham R Sherwood 11/24

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Telboy

Mon 18th Nov 2024 23:03

We wish we knew as well Graham! We're wracking our brains for what line five might be. This will go viral I'm sure. Or perhaps it will be glossed over...life's too short.

Anyway, I liked it.

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